My blog was very put together and thought out. My summary was a good length and very understandable. My classmates were intuned to what I had to say. It was well thought out and provided useful information. The class learned alot. Anyone who wanted to buy a PS3 can make a more accurate opinion.
However, even though my summary was very impressive it had few mistakes. There wasn't many but enough to raise my summary from a 97 to a 100. I had a few mispelled words and puncition errors. There were also some sentence fragments. Mrs. Crawford as well as the class helped with the revisions. M summary is honestly better now thanks to the help of them.
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